This week's 100wc was that the weather changed dramatically. We have been leaning to use better words and semi-colons.
It was a great afternoon I just made my lunch; I go to watch tv and I hear it will be sunny then I run outside and jumped off a cliff… into water. But meanwhile at my house they had a tornado warning!! Then when I get up in the morning I hear lightning and loud winds when I look out my window a big tree goes flying through my window… after I walked away to my storm shelter put when I walked past my tv and the weather told us that your storm shelter will not be enough…
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